23 November 2007

I made a mistake

I went to my room to find a pen
I made a mistake and found a hen

I went to my room to find a toy
I made a mistake and found a boy

I went to castle to see the king
I made a mistake and found a ring

3 comments:

skizales said...

I thought your first poem about the hen was so funny -- Joe

Anonymous said...

nice photo.
regads tanmay.

Unknown said...

I love your poem you are so creative
I visited your class i am from 6b
Bye